Unreliable Narrator and 1st-Person PoV: Azula's Scene from SDK Ch. 18
( Notes on point of view and rewriting )
I'm still somewhat partial to the original version because I wanted to show that even monsters have motivation beyond "I want to make the hero's life miserable," but I think the final cut fits better into the story. For posterity, here is the original:
( Original Azula scene )
I'm still somewhat partial to the original version because I wanted to show that even monsters have motivation beyond "I want to make the hero's life miserable," but I think the final cut fits better into the story. For posterity, here is the original:
( Original Azula scene )
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