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2014-04-18 01:01 am
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Review: Bird by Bird, by Anne Lamott

Bird by Bird was the first book recommended in a thread I started about writing advice books over at the[community profile] write_away community. I've made it something of a project to read the recommendations in my free time. I started with Bird and finished it over a weekend traveling to another city and back.

Here's what I thought )

So, bumps and all, Bird by Bird is a worthwhile read for anyone interested in a perspective on the ups and downs of a writer's life, especially one that is funny and compassionate at the same time. I liked it a lot.
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2014-03-07 02:18 pm

Historical fiction fails: Ancient Korea edition

In the course of researching for my novel, which takes place in ancient Korea and parts of modern-day China, I turned to e-book bookstores among other sources. It seemed an easy start, a way to dip a toe in the waters without devoting too much space and money from the first go.

Unfortunately, that water I was dipping into? Actually sort of scummy. Now I did fish out one excellent book, a work of non-fiction that I liked so much that I read it all the way through even though only a small portion was directly relevant to my research. Unfortunately the other books I found on Google Play were all duds, particularly the historical fiction.

Bad history, horrible writing, and terrible art )

I am duly traumatized by my attempts to begin research via e-books. I'm not even getting into the nonfiction fails--bad history books based on a known forgery don't even make the cut after all the crap I've been treated to. Now look what you've done it, awful historical fiction--you've raised the bar so high, or sunk it so low, I can't even get a proper hate-on for run-of-the-mill bad books.
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2014-02-13 03:46 am

Frostflower and Thorn and also Windbourne: Worldbuilding, inside and out

Phyllis Ann Karr's Frostflower and Thorn and Frostflower and Windbourne were published in 1980 and 1982 respectively. The sorceress Frostflower and warrior Thorn hail from the Tanglelands, the kind of gritty, dangerous pseudo-Medieval European fantasy setting that is very much at home in the eighties and which is seeing a resurgence in the aughts and teens of this century. (If the descriptors "gritty," "dangerous," and "pseudo-Medieval" remind you of anything, Frostflower and Thorn begins with a note that it was first written during George R. R. Martin's Clarke College workshop in 1977.)

Worldbuilding, pacing, feministing )
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2014-02-02 09:52 pm

The 19th Wife: A Novel - spoiler-free review

19th wife cover image

I picked up The 19th Wife: A Novel because I got bored waiting for my bus. I crossed to the used bookstore across from the bus station, but didn't see much of interest until I caught sight of the book near the entrance just as I was getting ready to leave. The book seemed to have an interesting premise and promised to tell the story of polygamy in the Mormon faith, a subject I was curious about. I did a quick search on my phone for reviews, which generally seemed positive. I grabbed the book with minutes to spare before the bus arrived.

What I liked, what I didn't like )

Overall, though, I think the book ended well. Once the pretensions of murder mystery were out of the way it concluded pretty much the only way it could have, affirming the ineffable mystery of belief. I don't hold truck with organized religion, as regular readers know, but I am forever fascinated and humbled by the human capacity for faith, and our resilience in finding goodness and togetherness in even contradictory and oppressive institutions. For that reason The 19th Wife is a book that will stay with me a while.
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2014-01-17 01:11 pm

Frozen: Good, could have been better

Frozen is, in my memory, the first movie I have been agitating to see for an entire month. This began when I saw the Let It Go clip on YouTube via Love, Joy, Feminism. Like Libby Anne I was deeply moved by the way Elsa felt free to break away and express everything about herself she had been forced to repress all her life. Watching it, I tasted again the lonely exhilaration of that moment when you forget about being good and dutiful and give yourself permission to be your own self, a necessary if not final step to healing.

This began my hankering to see the movie, which to my disappointment would not open in Korea for another month. I all but marked the day on my calendar and pestered the husband about it every few days, until the long-suffering man took me to see it yesterday on opening night.

Here be many spoilers )

For all its flaws and limitations Frozen has come further than just about any Disney movie since Lilo and Stitch, and shows that feminist storytelling is good storytelling, period. That's only natural, since stories are about human concerns and feminist themes are issues that affect people in their relation to gender and sex. Feminism, in other words, is about huge swathes of life. Leave those out and you can't tell the full truth of human experience. Frozen goes in the right direction. My only complaint is that it doesn't go far enough.
ljwrites: A typewriter with multicolored butterflies on it. (kira)
2013-08-15 01:24 pm

Tell, Don't Show? AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO CARES

After finishing Deep Space Nine and marveling at the story (not that my progress on the reviews in any way reflects that), I heard from fairladyz2005 about the "relaunch" books that continue the story. Since they were on Kobo Store I figured hey, why not. I bought Twist of Faith, which collects several of the DS9 continuation novels including Avatar books 1 and 2 and Demons of Air and Darkness.

I am on Chapter 13 of 20 in the first book of Avatar, so I'd say I'm a bit more than halfway through. The story and characterization are good, but the writing is irritating me so much it's impeding my ability to continue.

Am I the only one who's bothered? )
ljwrites: A typewriter with multicolored butterflies on it. (kira)
2013-07-30 03:30 pm

Capsule Review: DS9 1.03 "Past Prologue"

One-line summary: A suspicious tailor joins Dr. Bashir for lunch. It's all downhill from there.

Synopsis )

Can I nickname this episode Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy? )

That trust, a calculated, mature trust with eyes wide open to the ramifications and consequences, is both the force that makes friends for the Federation and sometimes makes it vulnerable to its enemies. It's the balance the Federation's peoples have struck in a perilous universe and it paid off in this episode, and in the form of Deep Space Nine, a place where friends and enemies from across the worlds are brought together for stories in infinite and enjoyable combinations.
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2013-06-22 12:00 pm

How to Give Feedback

Since I previously wrote a post about taking criticism, I figured I'd also do one about giving feedback. That means both positive and negative feedback. Though giving criticism is often harder, I believe giving helpful praise also takes skill and thought. I think the advice is helpful for different creative efforts, though writing is the one I'm most familiar with.

Seven tips for a learning approach to reviews )

TL; DR: Both you and the recipient of your feedback will gain more if you approach the feedback process as a learning experience for yourself rather than a favor to the creator or an excuse to vent your frustrations. You can do that by backing up your statements with principles of creation and solid facts, being honest, courteous, and open-minded, and by learning more about your craft.
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2013-06-14 08:24 am

DS9 Review: 1.01-02 "The Emissary"

(06/14/13: Updated with synopsis. Spoilers and some bad language.)

I've started watching Deep Space Nine on fairladyz2005's recommendation, and it is certainly worthy of high praise. I've finished the first season and like it so much I've decided to write a series of posts talking briefly about my impressions.

One-line summary: Sisko falls into a hole and must dig his way out.

Comments )

Overall "The Emissary" does what a pilot episode should do, setting up a premise for the whole series that will be a source of new conflicts and stories. The episode gave me high hopes for the show, the first season of which was a mixed bag with some real highlights. More on that later; for now, Luna out.
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2013-06-08 12:32 am

Capsule Review: DS9 1.11 "The Nagus"

It was interesting to find out more about Ferengi society, something that would happen in further enjoyable episodes of the show. I'd have thought a race of market-obsessed capitalists, of all people, would believe in meritocracy and fair play, but it seems Ferengi society is a more "nature red in tooth and claw" sort of place. Maybe that's a statement on capitalism, that by itself it is not conducive to either peace or social progress. In fact, arguably much of our own history since the Industrial Revolution has been a history of curbing the worst impulses of unregulated capitalism, with varying degrees of success. Ferengi society may be in the beginning of its own change, but it's going to be a long and difficult process as later episodes will show.

Some things felt off to me, though. )
ljwrites: A typewriter with multicolored butterflies on it. (kira)
2013-06-07 11:37 pm

Capsule Review: DS9 1.10 "Move Along Home"

Another Trek episode, another game-breaking alien species. This one was mainly interesting for the new depth it added to Quark's character in his pivotal scene. It was sort of a bummer that this game-obsessed species don't show up anymore (at least not as of early Season 5, which is where I'm at), there seemed to be some interesting statements in their story about gaming and honesty and stuff. And Jesus, it was a shock to come back from Season 5 and see Jake Sisko as a 14-year-old boy. They sure change in four years, don't they.
ljwrites: A typewriter with multicolored butterflies on it. (kira)
2013-05-13 01:30 pm

Capsule Review: DS9 1.08 "Dax"

The awesome [profile] fairladyz2005, who introduced me to DS9, also sent me a list of TNG episodes that were relevant to DS9. One of them was "The Host," a Season 4 TNG episode that first introduced the Trill. The DS9 episode "Dax" is in many ways an inversion of "The Host." Where the Trill character in "The Host" had to prove himself to be the same guy as a previous incarnation in order to gain the trust of warring factions, the titular Trill in "Dax" must prove herself a different person in order to get away from the crime a past self is accused of committing.

That question, the meaning of identity, is the central subject of "Dax" much as it was in "The Host." However, the understanding of that question, along with the setting information on the Trill, has become a great deal more sophisticated since TNG. Much like the changes in the Ferengi since their first appearance (TNG 1.05 "The Last Outpost"), it shows the evolution of Trek writing.

On the law, and what really matters )

"Dax" may not have had the most original or unexpected resolution, but the abovementioned subtlety in the writing still drew me into the story and made me think. The episode was also a smart legal drama with an appealing sense of humility that a court is not always the final arbiter of truth, and the real story happens with the choices of men and women in their lives. The courtroom is a forum where some very interesting issues are laid bare, though, and the courtroom scenes were worth it for that reason.
ljwrites: A typewriter with multicolored butterflies on it. (kira)
2013-04-19 12:54 am

Capsule Review: DS9 1.07 "Q-Less"

After the high of 1.06 "Captive Pursuit" the episode "Q-Less" was a bit of a letdown. I mean it was fine on its own: the central character was interesting (and hot), and the interplay between her and the cosmic annoyance of Q was fun to watch. At the end of the day, though, the episode didn't have anything to do with much of anything in the show at large. As a follow-up to relevant TNG plots it worked; to someone who doesn't have a background in that show it's mostly meaningful in showing that Deep Space Nine is the kind of place where weird crap happens.

Of course, the fact that weird crap goes down on DS9 was pretty much the aspect that excited me about 1.03 "Past Prologue," but "Past Prologue" worked for me where "Q-Less" didn't because "Past Prologue" said concrete things about the setting while "Q-Less" just seemed to up the level of randomness for the sake of whimsy. My verdict for the episode is "Meh." At least we know Sisko can throw a mean punch.
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2013-04-17 01:46 am

Capsule Review: DS9 1.06 "Captive Pursuit"

It's not often that a science fiction TV episode gets my academic side berserk with excitement. I mean, even I have to admit a TV show about aliens and spaceships that goes on and on about theories of law and economics and social justice would be dull.

"Captive Pursuit," however, is notable for punching me right in the ivory tower without being dull at all. Hoo boy, is it not.

Let's see if I can make the review not-dull as well. )

Though this is very much an O'Brien episode, the rest of the regular cast played lively supporting roles. I particularly liked how the script built up to Sisko's crucial assist of O'Brien by showing the Commander's sense of timing beforehand. It was as though the station were a symphony, an endeavor of cooperation and trust conducted by a virtuoso. That trust didn't budge even when Sisko chewed O'Brien's head off at the end for his actions. If the result of such ability and camaraderie is an episode like "Captive Pursuit," that's certainly the kind of music I'd like to hear more of.
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2013-03-01 10:45 pm

Capsule Review: DS9 1.05 "Babel"

Are we on "Captive Pursuit" yet? One more to go? Well then...

On its own almost until the resolution, "Babel" is a by-the-numbers Trek episode: Crisis strikes the station, the crew work to solve it, and save the day with their ingenuity and- wait, no they don't. And that's where it's interesting.

Active potatoes eradicate no rayon? )

Lavanyasix called DS9 the red-headed stepchild of the Trek franchise, and I think episodes like this encapsulate its status as being in the franchise yet not of it. The writers use the Trek tropes only to twist them and tell a story about the local situation, establishing what kind of place Bajor is. This kind of work laid the foundation for what was to come down the road, establishing DS9 as the odd one out in the franchise, sure, but a great odd one out.
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2013-02-28 04:06 pm

Capsule Review: DS9 1.04 "A Man Alone"

I know these are coming at sort of a frenetic schedule, but I'm on a dopamine rush from starting something new (and a Real Life Responsibility I'm procrastinating on, in case you couldn't tell), so might as well use that energy while I have it. Besides, I'm impatient to move on and write about 1.06 "Captive Pursuit," which rocked my world for reasons I will discuss.

How to host a murder mystery... IN SPACE! )

Overall "A Man Alone" is a good standalone episode and that further develops the setting, characters, and character relationships. Much like "Babel" after it it's not particulary memorable, but was solid and enjoyable. I'd put this one in the second tier when it comes to Season 1 episodes.
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2012-12-24 07:48 pm

The Hobbit Movie: Spoiler-Free Review

Here's something you might not often hear from a Lord of the Rings fan: Elves bore the hell out of me. I'm not talking the elves of the First and Second Ages, actual red-blooded bastards like Fëanor who destroyed himself and his entire line in pursuit of three sparkly gems, or his fellows who disobeyed their benevolent Valar overlords to forge a way to Middle Earth and committed lots of murder in the process. Those were the interesting elves, the ones who actually wanted stuff in the world and made mistakes, even committed crimes over those desires.

Complain, complain, complain. Also, The Hobbit. )
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2012-12-18 10:45 am

"Beware of Pity" and the Claims of Sympathy

Beware of Pity is the only completed novel by Stephen Zweig, an Austrian novelist, playwright, and biographer. I never heard of the guy before a French friend mentioned the book in an e-mail, but evidently he was hugely popular in the 1920s and 1930s. I was glad to have discovered his novel, which is a psychological epic, high drama, and nail-biting suspense all in one. I have read the new Anthea Bell translation, which I highly recommend.

Ruminations on the paradox of liberalism, power, selflessness and more in one spoiler-free package )
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2012-07-17 06:52 pm

Y: The Last Man Spoiler-Free Review

So yesterday I finished reading the Korean translation of the five-book deluxe edition of Y: The Last Man, the comic book series about every man and every male mammal dropping dead at the same time from a mysterious cataclysm. This leaves humanity in very real danger of dying out within decades. The protagonist Yorick is the last surviving man on Earth who becomes a piece in a vast game of women and nations working to secure gain or to give humanity a chance at survival.

It's an intriguing premise, post-apocalypse with a twist. It explores a lot of feminist issues in a world populated solely by women, and avoids the most obvious cliches like Yorick becoming a harem-master or a stallion. In fact his driving motivation is to find his girlfriend Beth, who was stranded in Australia at the time the worldwide gendercide happened. It's an exciting, very human start which, alas, did not sustain the drama. More on that below.

On the art and writing )